16 January 2008

Your mission, should you choose to accept it...

Go to this article, by ESPN.com's Jemele Hill. Scroll down to the section titled "All-Time Hook Up team", and read the section on Wayne Gretzky.

Do you see what I see? "The NHL didn't even lift an eyebrow when the Great One's name was brought up in a gambling ring in which his wife, Janet Jones, and former Coyotes general manager Michael Barnett." Is it just me, or does that sentence end without the expression of any sort of coherent thought?

Obviously, it's just me, because no professional writer could ever do something of.

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